Dear MK community.
It is my second PS Bea trial ever...
Note that the Model wears High heels
It gives her the appearence of being on the rock below
Or of jumping like real Masai
Tell me what do you think..
Where and how should I improve what ?
Just comment (auf English/Deutsch/francais... Akuna Matata !)
See the other version in the chapter Weitere Schätze
http://www.model-kartei.de/bilder/bild/9218022/
Danke für eure Hilfe
LG
JiB

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08.07.2011
Salut, die zweite Versionschon viel besser. Dennoch ist erkennbar, dass das Licht von rechts oben nicht zum Nasenschatten passt.

lg klaus
08.07.2011
Hi JiB,

your " misty morning Massai maiden" is getting better all the time!

Merklich weniger Kontrastdifferenz als vorhin,

Tönung auch ähnlicher.... es ist nicht einfach, ich versuche es gar nicht!!

( Sehe auch Robbie... )

Best, Mike
I think it's a lot better than the first version
It is not easy but practice makes perfect
Still, I prefer natural photography
Wish you a nice weekend

Ingo
07.07.2011
I have to give you repect for attempting editing.
I gave up and threw the towel in ...after two days...

I guess when my photos get good,then I will try again at editing.
It seems I dont have the time...I do alot of video and wedding cutting.

I like it...what you did...it can only get better or ?
lg Robbie
07.07.2011
Akuna Matata in swahili
Mai mi pan ha in Thai
Pas de problème en Francais
Keine Ursache auf Deutsch

danke robbie
I am working hard on editing, waiting for specialists comments.
MK: Pack aus !!!!

!-)
LG
JiB
07.07.2011
Akuna Matata..? I think that means how are you..? i could be wrong.
I think it is african language too. I could be wrong...
But I am not wrong in saying this Model is a total knock out.
I admire her soft and innocent look,and her pretty face and slender figure.
The editing looks wonderful ,for your second attempt.

It is like something we have not seen here yet...

I like it!
Robbie

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